Bill's Notes

[Industrialblog, September 30, 2005]
Gold Star
An ongoing joke here at IndustrialBlog, usually delivered without much in the way of hint, concerns my love of big, obscure words. What some people call pretentious I think is funny. Big words, after all, have a purpose. They often mean very precise things, things we all know about but had no idea there was an exact word for. They condense language, often allowing us to say in one word a concept that would take five, 10 or even 20 words otherwise. Thus, they allow us to think more densely.

Plus, there's something immensely amusing about using a 50-cent word to polish a concept that's a bit low-rent. Is it better to say "coprophagous" or "shit-eating"? Is there a better word for a no-work job than "sinecure"? Is it better to say "nice ass" or "callipygian"? Is there better word than "anomie" to describe Kurt Cobain's lyrics, "Here we are now, entertain us!"

Anyway, that said, these days it's rare that I read a sentence that contains two of these gems, neither of which I had ever seen before, much less know. Francis P. of Eternity Road writes:

Your Curmudgeon will concede that his customary lucubrations are noteworthy principally for their anfractuosity.

This is not a man to be trifled with in an argument. BTW, I have no comment on the substance of his post. But lucubrations? Anfractuosity? Two Gold Stars and go to the head of the class!
Francis W. Porretto (www):
Hah! All those years of study under William F. Buckley have finally paid off!
9.30.2005 11:27am
Chris (mail) (www):
I guess that it all depends on what you think that the purpose of language is for the task at hand.

For example, I think that we are all familiar with books which are obviously by NYT writers because the author either (1) lives with such insularity that he has no idea what words actually are common or (2) probably sleeps with his thesaurus under the pillow in case he should need it in an emergency.

I agree that there are plenty of indespensable words which are unfortunately uncommon (you run accross this in philosophy and theology all of the time), but the result is that you either have to give up having much of an audience or dispense with them anyway, whether in a footnote, an aside, or a previous chapter.

That being said, Orthodoxy by G.K. Chesterton is one of the most sublime and rich books ever written, and to my recollection the sum total cost of the words in it is probably no more than a few dollars (i.e. they're mostly $.01 words, figuring that you get some common ones like "a", "an", "the", etc. for maybe $.01 for 30 and words like "man", "castle", etc. for $.05 for 10).
9.30.2005 12:09pm
Francis W. Porretto (www):
Sometimes, Chris, one makes a point as much with one's style as with one's substance. The whole point of the sentence Bill quoted was to give an example of an unnecessarily obscure statement, to highlight the unusual clarity of the quoted passages.

Apropos of which, don't use foreign words. And avoid cliches like the plague!
9.30.2005 12:24pm
Bill (mail) (www):
Hi Francis. I thought Buckley might be behind this. Still, in all my years of reading NR, I never came across those two words. Thanks.
9.30.2005 3:11pm
Chris (mail) (www):
Francis,

I was talking generally about Bill's point that big, obscure words can be useful, not about your particular use of them.

Chesterton, btw, said that big words are mental labor-saving devices. I'm not sure that I disagree with him. From Orthodoxy:

It is customary to complain of the bustle and strenuousness of our epoch. But in truth the chief mark of our epoch is a profound laziness and fatigue; and the fact is that the real laziness is the cause of the apparent bustle. Take one quite external case; the streets are noisy with taxicabs and motorcars; but this is not due to human activity but to human repose. There would be less bustle if there were more activity, if people were simply walking about. Our world would be more silent if it were more strenuous. And this which is true of the apparent physical bustle is true also of the apparent bustle of the intellect. Most of the machinery of modern language is labour-saving machinery; and it saves mental labour very much more than it ought. Scientific phrases are used like scientific wheels and piston-rods to make swifter and smoother yet the path of the comfortable. Long words go rattling by us like long railway trains. We know they are carrying thousands who are too tired or too indolent to walk and think for themselves. It is a good exercise to try for once in a way to express any opinion one holds in words of one syllable. If you say "The social utility of the indeterminate sentence is recognized by all criminologists as a part of our sociological evolution towards a more humane and scientific view of punishment," you can go on talking like that for hours with hardly a movement of the gray matter inside your skull. But if you begin "I wish Jones to go to gaol and Brown to say when Jones shall come out," you will discover, with a thrill of horror, that you are obliged to think. The long words are not the hard words, it is the short words that are hard. There is much more metaphysical subtlety in the word "damn" than in the word "degeneration."
10.2.2005 1:47pm